Haiku #24

 

We are born falling,

like a diver in the air,

to the sea’s embrace,

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5 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. eva626
    Mar 24, 2011 @ 19:20:53

    short yet so great!!!

    Reply

  2. mbwilliams
    Mar 24, 2011 @ 19:32:14

    thanks eva626! (that response wasn’t intentionally short!) 🙂

    Reply

  3. Sonia M.
    Mar 24, 2011 @ 20:47:51

    Great imagery. Short but intense!

    Reply

  4. mbwilliams
    Mar 24, 2011 @ 21:10:58

    Thanks Sonia, somehow using less words does seem to add to the imagery

    Reply

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