9 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. chesshirecat
    Jun 05, 2011 @ 13:59:08

    I’ve enjoyed this piece. Good imagery and creative word usage with verbiage.
    Thank you.

    Reply

  2. Kay Camden
    Jun 06, 2011 @ 16:03:52

    I like the last line. Very insightful. If we had everything we wanted, we would have nothing to drive us. We’d be lost.

    Reply

    • mbwilliams
      Jun 06, 2011 @ 18:55:50

      Yes dreaming is part of human thought and human life, too many people seem to want to get rid of all wants, all dreams. Let’s celebrate it for one day it will all be gone! Thank you for reading and your insightful comments.

      Reply

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  4. pattisj
    Jun 13, 2011 @ 20:27:16

    I liked the metaphor of the “inner spring.” Good read.

    Reply

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