I am completely overwhelmed to have won the perfect poet award for week 48. More than anything it wonderful to be read and have so many great comments. Here’s to all you readers and writers out there, and all the inspiration you pass around, like torches burning in the depths of night.
I would like to nominate: BragaThe Sword
06 Jul 2011 36 Comments
by mbwilliams in Poems Tags: Arts, Blacksmithing, character, inspiration, life, Martial Arts, Mental Health, Metal Craft, Online Writing, Personality, Philosophy, Poetry, pots rally week 48, Religion and Spirituality, Samurai, spirituality, sword, Thought, thoughts, warrior, Warriorship, way of the sword, way of the warrior, Wisdom, Zen, Zen Mirror
There are many parts of a life,
That make up the whole,
And many components of a man
That forge his character.
Chill winds and winter snow,
Or sun and sea,
Each can test a man and temper his steel,
The mix of the iron the bough
That breaks or bends,
In the storm of his making
charlesmashburn
Jul 06, 2011 @ 22:27:49
Excellent! very well said and written!
mbwilliams
Jul 07, 2011 @ 21:06:24
Many thanks for reading and for your encouragement
Bhaga
Jul 07, 2011 @ 03:30:04
Aaah! Here comes the Inner Katana I was looking for, after noticing immediately when first coming to your blog the beautiful outer Katana that, along with the Rose, welcomes the visitor!…
The sounds and rhythm of the words, and the tempo of your poem as a whole evoke so well the hard hammering that you describe, and the storm it means in life, I really congratulate you for this piece, so perfectly forged itself, contents and form in perfect fit together!…
mbwilliams
Jul 07, 2011 @ 21:20:55
Many thanks Braga. The key line is ‘the storm of our making’…Or is it the storm of our own making!?:)
Bhaga
Jul 07, 2011 @ 12:54:43
Again me: This new poem of yours unexpectedly inspired me one too, dedicated to you (it is not said who) and your endeavour here.
I just now posted it on my blog!…
mbwilliams
Jul 07, 2011 @ 21:21:24
Will check it out straight away
eva626
Jul 09, 2011 @ 18:23:15
this was great, i like how you played ‘steel’ into it . very nice
mbwilliams
Jul 11, 2011 @ 20:58:24
yeah that took me by surpise too
johnewordslinger
Jul 11, 2011 @ 22:55:07
I love this write, even more elements are at play.
thank you and much appreciated.
PS the answer to your question
is, its a picture called War of the Roses
I lost the direct link, because it hase been moved,
but once I find it, or it finds me, I sure will credit it..
WS
mbwilliams
Jul 15, 2011 @ 15:50:57
Well it looks really cool and definitely adds something to your blog. I will have to do more to mine, but there is always something else to do! Thanks for dropping by.
thingy
Jul 13, 2011 @ 22:54:38
An excellent and inspiring write. : )
mbwilliams
Jul 15, 2011 @ 08:44:36
glad you were inspired! Thanks for reading
Jingle
Jul 14, 2011 @ 01:43:13
amazing..
mbwilliams
Jul 15, 2011 @ 08:45:00
Thanks Jingle
brownpaperbaggirl
Jul 14, 2011 @ 19:10:01
Wonderful!
mbwilliams
Jul 15, 2011 @ 08:45:19
Glad you liked 🙂
Anna Montgomery
Jul 14, 2011 @ 21:47:25
Great unfurling of the metaphor.
mbwilliams
Jul 15, 2011 @ 08:45:36
Many thanks, I enjoyed exploring this one
mindlovemisery
Jul 15, 2011 @ 08:01:54
I love the metaphor it’s one I too have worked with powerful writing loved it!
mbwilliams
Jul 15, 2011 @ 08:46:58
Thanks MLM – good to meet a like-minded spirit!
Jeffrey Lewis
Jul 15, 2011 @ 16:03:54
a “solid” piece of writing…
mbwilliams
Jul 16, 2011 @ 11:16:07
I flatter myself that it was well ‘forged’ 🙂
Ina
Jul 16, 2011 @ 09:40:54
Good poem, the metaphor works very well!
mbwilliams
Jul 16, 2011 @ 11:15:09
Thanks Ina – the analogy does work well doesn’t it
Aaron Smigielski
Jul 17, 2011 @ 00:18:53
There is good connection between the forging of a sword and the forging of a man. Well done.
mbwilliams
Jul 18, 2011 @ 22:55:55
Of that there is no doubt – layers of strong and flexible steel forming the ultimate tough weapon…which if it is used right, will never have to strike. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Jaan Pehchaan
Jul 17, 2011 @ 03:33:48
The Sword – Katana, Blacksmith, a Swordsman, or a Wordsmith? Well done!
mbwilliams
Jul 18, 2011 @ 23:22:41
Thank you! I guess you learn to practice you art with whatever materials are available.
Cindy Eksuzian
Jul 18, 2011 @ 14:08:28
Beautiful poem Mark about the male aspect of choice! Well said!
mbwilliams
Jul 18, 2011 @ 23:26:16
Yes we men do like our…ahem swords! Thanks 🙂
R. Renee Vickers
Jul 18, 2011 @ 15:18:54
A sword is a great analogy for man in so many ways. It takes time and fire for one to prove his worth and temper his impulses. Well done!
mbwilliams
Jul 18, 2011 @ 23:31:05
I think we all need some time in the forging fire! Thank you for reading and your comments.
shannadodd
Jul 18, 2011 @ 20:57:42
Well done.
mbwilliams
Jul 18, 2011 @ 23:32:29
Thank you 🙂
Promising Poets' Poetry Cafe
Jul 26, 2011 @ 18:13:51
glad to see you take the perfect poet award, please leave a comment under the award post, nominate a poet for week 49 award …
appreciate your input on rally week 48, join again on Thursday for week 49.
cheer.
mbwilliams
Jul 27, 2011 @ 20:34:03
Many thanks – I have read 18+ and made my nomination!