A Wall of Will

A wall of will
Bricking off feeling,
Fending off friends,
The world is not just thought,
There is more than clouds
Hiding the Moon,
A single tear starts the rainstorm,
A torrent to breach the mightiest dam,
Mankind will scoop water
From the river of feeling,
Or he will kneel to it
Unknowing
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10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. abichica
    Aug 08, 2011 @ 20:40:39

    beautiful, i love the way you are describing mankind, and the wall of will is something that we all should have.. definitely..:-)

    Reply

    • mbwilliams
      Aug 11, 2011 @ 15:51:59

      Thanks abichica! I guess it is a case of having the wall there for our own protection, but not being afraid to venture beyond it now and again. Thanks for commenting!

      Reply

  2. Mihir Vatsa
    Aug 08, 2011 @ 21:21:05

    Quite true, isn’t it?

    “There is more than clouds
    Hiding the Moon,
    A single tear starts the rainstorm,
    A torrent to breach the mightiest dam,”

    Very vivid imagery! Its the first time I have visited your blog and I am happy that I found you.

    Cheers!

    Reply

  3. Jingle
    Aug 09, 2011 @ 17:02:22

    love it,

    the title and the description are simply fantastic.

    Reply

  4. Rekha
    Aug 10, 2011 @ 09:53:40

    This is simply beautiful….one can shut away the world only far so long.

    Reply

  5. eclipseofthemoon
    Aug 11, 2011 @ 11:03:35

    Stunning…

    Reply

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