The feeling of completion

The feeling of completion
Momentary, ephemeral
Like a scene too big
For the scope of your camera’s lens,
Like the line you never meant to write,
A single breath
You’d be content to make your last-
Do we live on
Just to feel it’s presence one more time?

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6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. David Guzman
    Sep 08, 2011 @ 00:26:20

    That was beautiful. : )

    Completion is definitely something of a momentary euphoria, at least in my mind. There is something so peaceful about it that I find myself consistently seeking.

    Reply

  2. thingy
    Sep 08, 2011 @ 21:42:50

    A very intriguing write. Are we satisfied after completing something? Well, you’ve got me thinking, now. : )

    Reply

  3. Life: Between the lines
    Sep 09, 2011 @ 00:31:28

    It sure can escape us, but when we have felt it, we wish to hold on to it forever 🙂
    cool work! Thanks fort the visit!

    Reply

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