Featherlight

Featherlight tip toes
moss stones across the river
Flowing without pause

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29 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Kay Salady
    Sep 22, 2011 @ 08:56:04

    Oh, I like this, Mark! I could actually see and hear it. 🙂

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  2. Poetry & Icecream
    Sep 22, 2011 @ 14:29:39

    I love haiku too, a snapshot of a moment in words. I love this one. Great imagery 🙂

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  3. charlesmashburn
    Sep 22, 2011 @ 15:30:16

    Another good one, Mark. I’m always impressed that so much can be said and such visions can be sparked with so few words. Nicely done!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/in-the-blink-of-an-eye/

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  4. Sarah Johnston
    Sep 22, 2011 @ 17:44:17

    Excellent your images and how well done. Haiku is new to me but I am starting to understand more and really like reading them thank you for sharing
    http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/09/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week_21.html

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  5. fiveloaf
    Sep 22, 2011 @ 17:49:36

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  6. The Orange Tree
    Sep 22, 2011 @ 18:38:30

    cute Haiku.

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  7. elainedanforth
    Sep 23, 2011 @ 04:08:35

    Painted vividly with a featherlight touch! I am there with you, can see the situation in my mind. Beautiful to get so much across in so few words.

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  8. Christopher Raley
    Sep 23, 2011 @ 06:02:26

    Thanks for this poem. You really capture the spirit of Haiku here. Simple at the first read but increaasing vivid and meaningful each time through.

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  9. anjum wasim dar
    Sep 24, 2011 @ 17:04:02

    Highly effective,sounds and silence speak in the lines.Well written.

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  10. Ina
    Sep 24, 2011 @ 20:19:49

    Water and stones together in beautiful poem.

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  11. Bodhirose
    Sep 24, 2011 @ 21:53:59

    I love haiku–this is so well done–the images vivid.

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  12. Just Sayin'
    Sep 28, 2011 @ 02:55:43

    Good imagery. I enjoyed reading it.

    My entry: http://wp.me/s1LMFk-749

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  13. dhitzunako
    Sep 29, 2011 @ 14:20:58

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  14. Thursday Poets Rally
    Sep 30, 2011 @ 19:13:40

    original, love it.

    please comment to let us know after you are done returning favors and making a minimum 18 comments,

    Happy Rally.
    Thanks a ton for the beautiful entry and instant participation.

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  15. CC Champagne
    Sep 30, 2011 @ 19:18:36

    Great imagery! I can almost smell it! *pathetic, I know, but still*

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  16. Anna Montgomery
    Oct 03, 2011 @ 05:40:47

    ‘Flowing without pause’ – I held my breath, thank you.

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