Unblemished

Unblemished like the sky,
My love
for all I’ll never know.
These words just a poem;
A recipe,
That’ll never add up
To you

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15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ina
    Sep 26, 2011 @ 21:40:11

    Lovely, unblemished like the sky…

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  2. Seabell
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 00:32:48

    It is like a recipe… Wonderful love poem!

    Reply

  3. charlesmashburn
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 02:07:06

    Reply

  4. mairmusic
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 02:34:29

    Cool idea– a recipe is a description.

    Reply

  5. Lara Dunning
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 04:21:43

    Touching and a little sad.

    Reply

  6. Bhaga
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 11:30:00

    So true… No words, however loving, can add up to what we truly are.
    And yet the words, the form you found, make that poem beautiful too.

    Reply

  7. Morning
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 16:34:24

    powerful.

    Reply

  8. The Noiseless Cuckooclock
    Sep 27, 2011 @ 19:19:20

    a well penned story, with elegant imagery.

    Reply

  9. edpilolla
    Sep 28, 2011 @ 22:05:48

    it adds up to an excellent poem.

    Reply

  10. halfwaybetweenthegutter
    Oct 13, 2011 @ 11:20:57

    This is utterly beautiful.

    Reply

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