Freedom

We have the freedom
To choose differently;
To train diligently;
To change our world;
By changing ourselves.

Or we can try and stay the same,
Until our world grows dark,
Behind the dusty curtain of our eyes.

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16 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. halfwaybetweenthegutter
    Mar 21, 2012 @ 21:57:39

    Personally, I don’t know if I’ll ever escape from the last stanza. Hope can be so difficult. Wonderfully written, thank you.

    http://halfwaybetweenthegutter.wordpress.com/2012/03/20/if-you-could-see-me-now-2/

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  2. booguloo
    Mar 22, 2012 @ 02:43:25

    You do have some zen in your pen.

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  3. Mariya Koleva
    Mar 23, 2012 @ 11:46:30

    That’s the beauty and heavy duty of life, I agree – that the choice is ours (although we have no choice ;-)).
    Best, M.

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  4. ashbeezone
    Mar 25, 2012 @ 06:27:18

    Now That’s FREEDOM supposed to be meant from everybody.

    It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!

    Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/

    some of my Haiku Collections
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/

    and also, on my very recent Work as well
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2012/03/22/my-silly-shitty-hovering-mind-from-darkness-to-sunshine/

    !!! Happy Rally !!!
    Cheers !!

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  5. eflores3000
    Mar 28, 2012 @ 07:51:55

    Mainstream is not the way to go. Well said. We need more people to be unique and step out of the comfort zone that many seem to accept.
    -Erick F.

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  6. Paul
    Mar 28, 2012 @ 14:58:30

    Succintly written, keep still to move mountains, allow change…

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  7. magher1
    Apr 02, 2012 @ 19:23:20

    True and inspiring! It all depends on us…

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  8. Archana
    May 10, 2012 @ 23:11:10

    All you write is so simple, and with such depth.
    No wonder it’s Zen.

    In love, with all your work.
    Think i’d read it slowly and steadily, so i can absorb it too.
    🙂

    Reply

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