We have the freedom
To choose differently;
To train diligently;
To change our world;
By changing ourselves.
Or we can try and stay the same,
Until our world grows dark,
Behind the dusty curtain of our eyes.
19 Mar 2012 16 Comments
in Zen Thoughts Tags: inspiration, Online Writing, Philosophy, Poetry, Religion and Spirituality, writing, Zen, Zen Mirror
We have the freedom
To choose differently;
To train diligently;
To change our world;
By changing ourselves.
Or we can try and stay the same,
Until our world grows dark,
Behind the dusty curtain of our eyes.
halfwaybetweenthegutter
Mar 21, 2012 @ 21:57:39
Personally, I don’t know if I’ll ever escape from the last stanza. Hope can be so difficult. Wonderfully written, thank you.
http://halfwaybetweenthegutter.wordpress.com/2012/03/20/if-you-could-see-me-now-2/
mbwilliams
Mar 23, 2012 @ 11:44:21
That is the battle, to keep moving before we freeze in place! Thank you so much for reading.
booguloo
Mar 22, 2012 @ 02:43:25
You do have some zen in your pen.
mbwilliams
Mar 23, 2012 @ 11:44:42
🙂 Thank you Booguloo, much appreciated
Mariya Koleva
Mar 23, 2012 @ 11:46:30
That’s the beauty and heavy duty of life, I agree – that the choice is ours (although we have no choice ;-)).
Best, M.
mbwilliams
Mar 28, 2012 @ 22:23:50
Thanks for reading Mariya
ashbeezone
Mar 25, 2012 @ 06:27:18
Now That’s FREEDOM supposed to be meant from everybody.
It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!
Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/
some of my Haiku Collections
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/
and also, on my very recent Work as well
!!! Happy Rally !!!
Cheers !!
mbwilliams
Mar 28, 2012 @ 22:24:59
Thanks for your comment ashbeezone, I be sure to return the visit
eflores3000
Mar 28, 2012 @ 07:51:55
Mainstream is not the way to go. Well said. We need more people to be unique and step out of the comfort zone that many seem to accept.
-Erick F.
mbwilliams
Mar 28, 2012 @ 22:25:52
Glad we’re on the same page. Thanks for visiting!
Paul
Mar 28, 2012 @ 14:58:30
Succintly written, keep still to move mountains, allow change…
mbwilliams
Mar 28, 2012 @ 22:26:02
Thanks Paul!
magher1
Apr 02, 2012 @ 19:23:20
True and inspiring! It all depends on us…
mbwilliams
Apr 03, 2012 @ 21:18:42
Thank you for reading Magher, I’m glad you found some inspiration in this poem.
Archana
May 10, 2012 @ 23:11:10
All you write is so simple, and with such depth.
No wonder it’s Zen.
In love, with all your work.
Think i’d read it slowly and steadily, so i can absorb it too.
🙂
mbwilliams
May 20, 2012 @ 19:56:45
Thanks Archana, I really appreciate your kind words.