Is that me?

Bad mood sits like a cloud
Hunger, tiredness, impatience
Imperfect brain and body
Intelligence looks at the animal in the mirror
Is that me?

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2 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Bhaga
    Jul 03, 2015 @ 09:54:44

    Dear Mark,

    what an unfair question!…
    Perhaps you shouldn’t list only those negative, animal-like aspects that you mentioned, but also the positive ones that are also there (intelligence being only one of them, and not necessarily the best…). Then the picture of what you are would be more balanced, because more complete… And the very part of you that puts the question ‘Is that me?’, is precisely not the animal in you, is it?!
    Thank you anyway for these few lines showing that the seeker and poet are still there in you too! Nice to hear from them…
    🙂

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